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The Mirror of Forlorn Hope by =0neMoreTyme:icon0neMoreTyme:

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This glass heart has broken
and these shards bleed me dry.
The tender sweet aroma of love
is but a memory of another life.

Back into this fortress I go.
To be alone once again,
though I do not want it.
This seclusion rips at me.

Alas that my heart is mine enemy.
Beating a heartbeat
that will not sustain me.
"Yes, but why the love."

For which rum is no substitute.
Why has love been poured out? Dry.
These desolate wants and dreams
of love, I hope they come true.
©2008-2009 =0neMoreTyme
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Till then I remain alone and wonder why. What is so wrong with me that this "sweet and loving guy" would be single...

How is it that I can be asked "How are you still single?" when nobody says yes to that question...

"What would you say if I asked you to be my girl?"

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Mood: Depressed =0neMoreTyme:icon0neMoreTyme: Apr 21, 2008, 12:55:49 PM
Ok so I had been talking to C-Note before I left his place for class, and relationships got brought up... Why do I gotta be such a weakling when it comes to my heart? BTW I'm back in my fortress, so yeh that has a bt to do with my mood change... but I'm trying to not be so depressed... I juss had to put this up to get it outta my sys.

Yeh I'm single and lonely... Life goes on with or without me, or you... :(

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*xpsychoticxinsanityx:iconxpsychoticxinsanityx: Apr 21, 2008, 4:39:58 PM
awe that's so sweet i hope you feel better :heart:

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if you were starving i would cut out my heart and feed it to you
=0neMoreTyme:icon0neMoreTyme: Apr 21, 2008, 5:15:45 PM
sweet?

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*xpsychoticxinsanityx:iconxpsychoticxinsanityx: Apr 22, 2008, 6:54:51 AM
emotion is raw
and sweet
you might think of sweet as cheery and sugary

i don't...

sorry if that bothered you

am i going to have to remeber to keep typing "BE HAPPY"
*hug*

meh.. please do try to...

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if you were starving i would cut out my heart and feed it to you
=Shivarra:iconShivarra: Jun 8, 2008, 10:35:29 AM
I really like this, it's full of emotion, sadness, and very well written. :)

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=0neMoreTyme:icon0neMoreTyme: Jun 8, 2008, 11:43:59 AM
thx

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=Shivarra:iconShivarra: Jun 10, 2008, 9:39:34 AM
np

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Mood: Happy *JenniferG:iconJenniferG: Jun 11, 2008, 4:17:59 AM
This is a really well written piece, Slim. Although, I do believe "mine" should be "my" in the first line of the third stanza.

I do apologize that you are still single and I do wish there was a way I could help. For a while, before we got our relationship messed up, you were an amazing boyfriend... and I hope some very lucky girl gets to experience that.

"You never know until you try."
=0neMoreTyme:icon0neMoreTyme: Jun 11, 2008, 7:20:30 AM
in that stanza I took a note from old english, 'sides you know how odd my wording can be lol

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